कभी समतल् इसी द्हरातल् पर्
कभी गेहरी सन्करी मिली येही कही पर्
येही इक् लकीर् बाट्ती इस् ज़मीन् को
वही इक् दिखाती किनारा किसी को
लाल् इक् लकीर् किसी को सुहागिन् बनाती
कही दूर् आसमा ज़मीन् को मिलाती
अक्सर् दर्मियान् दूरियान् है बढाती
सहारो कि गुन्जाइश् गिराती मिटाती
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Man… this hindi was 2 much for me
anyways I ve understood now.. Well written.. I think lines of fate on ur head n palmcan make all d difference!!
Punit ji,
Aapne bahut hi saralta aur sahej tarike se iss kavita ke bhavo ko samjha diya hain… I really liked this poem a lot… esp the lines where u talk about the meeting of land and ocean… also the lines about partition of land
Wonderfully written…
Sometimes I think, how good it would be if I could write like You… but alas… whatever u think does not always happen…
behatareen!!!!
Itni khoobsurati se itni trivial cheez ko darshit kiya…. mazaaaaaaaaa aa gaya!!!
Welcome back Punit!!!!
M speechless !!!! ….its awesome…….. u shd seriously focus on tis talent of yours …….